tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post2076841314735405444..comments2023-12-26T02:27:12.382-08:00Comments on Rhyme Me A Smile: Friday Fun Day - Crambo aka Bouts RimésRachel Hoythttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-88985550358225284232013-04-13T07:52:14.601-07:002013-04-13T07:52:14.601-07:00I just went over to read... I really like them! I...I just went over to read... I really like them! It is a much richer poem with the additional lines and word changes. :)Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-3172721153054215372013-04-12T08:01:54.728-07:002013-04-12T08:01:54.728-07:00I decided to use this one as my poem for the day. ...I decided to use this one as my poem for the day. However, I amended it slightly. I'd be interested to hear if you like the modifications or no.Jeffrey Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06973104877310669196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-4276836337555738872013-03-21T06:29:17.067-07:002013-03-21T06:29:17.067-07:00I like it. :)I like it. :)Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-66457827467259932392013-03-21T06:27:21.734-07:002013-03-21T06:27:21.734-07:00I did not know, actually! :)I did not know, actually! :)Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-84203679293116968122013-03-16T14:41:37.024-07:002013-03-16T14:41:37.024-07:00Here I was thinking R could stand in for "our...Here I was thinking R could stand in for "our" to give the visual quality of his name, more or less close the rhyme with the same word by which it was opened, and with the R, create the audible effect of "our."Slow Wit Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15447104684310541808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-29014617102266749152013-03-16T14:39:14.190-07:002013-03-16T14:39:14.190-07:00You may know, but I was telling the story of Joan ...You may know, but I was telling the story of Joan of Arc with this rhyme.Slow Wit Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15447104684310541808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-54377884788637339712013-03-16T10:41:18.448-07:002013-03-16T10:41:18.448-07:00LOL! I think I've met R ick at bars many time...LOL! I think I've met R ick at bars many times. :)Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-12125166958741035142013-03-16T10:39:45.261-07:002013-03-16T10:39:45.261-07:00i love the fairy tale qualities this has! :)i love the fairy tale qualities this has! :)Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-5306568783979276902013-03-16T10:38:26.630-07:002013-03-16T10:38:26.630-07:00I'm really enjoying providing inspiration and ...I'm really enjoying providing inspiration and my abstract photography vacation. :)Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-88998416420804567012013-03-15T20:16:30.466-07:002013-03-15T20:16:30.466-07:00Rick, the loudmouth more annoying than a clowder
A...Rick, the loudmouth more annoying than a clowder<br />And when he's drunk he's even louder<br /><br />His girlfriend said not to call her<br />And filed a restraining order for armour<br /><br />He just gets worse and worse, more and more<br />Silence is golden, but he's not interested in ore<br /><br />No, he's got the friends of a fanatic<br />And they think he's a clown Slow Wit Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15447104684310541808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-79987749149140329172013-03-15T20:02:27.077-07:002013-03-15T20:02:27.077-07:00Raised among the roosters and clowder
Until a time...Raised among the roosters and clowder<br />Until a time that her visions grew louder<br /><br />It was a call for her<br />To don her armour<br />Her feats were known by kings and many more<br />A threat to those consumed by jewels and ore<br /><br />Young and able, captured, called a fanatic<br />The trial was the king's antic<br />A dark deed done by crowned rat, Ick!<br /><br />Slow Wit Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15447104684310541808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-43323087503289188342013-03-15T17:14:22.521-07:002013-03-15T17:14:22.521-07:00She is. I think I'll flesh out the poem next m...She is. I think I'll flesh out the poem next month before I post in my blog. Thanks for the inspiration!!!Jeffrey Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06973104877310669196noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-65966668876707004522013-03-15T15:46:34.362-07:002013-03-15T15:46:34.362-07:00LOL! Ewww, yucky shoe. :)LOL! Ewww, yucky shoe. :)Rachel Hoythttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12565668664072704971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-28550236788277802912013-03-15T13:22:17.359-07:002013-03-15T13:22:17.359-07:00at starfall the cat clowder
gets louder
gather aro...at starfall the cat clowder<br />gets louder<br />gather around her<br />window, scant armour<br />from their more<br />ardourous mewling, ore<br />unmined yet even shudders at high notes, fanatic<br />about her sleep, she fits at their antics<br />tosses a shoe, that misses and lands in the trash, ickBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-420799383026113003.post-37015352097386645722013-03-15T07:38:52.487-07:002013-03-15T07:38:52.487-07:00Silently formed a kitty clowder,
till suddenly the...Silently formed a kitty clowder,<br />till suddenly they became much louder.<br /><br />Rache the cat - don't mess with her.<br />Lo! She calls the clan for armour.<br /><br />Equipped with weapons - even more.<br />That's why they mine the precious ore.<br /><br />In her mind, such a fanatic.<br />But just a cat - so no such antic.<br />Kibble inspired dreams are ick!Jeffrey Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06973104877310669196noreply@blogger.com