Sunday, August 7, 2011

Train Track Therapy


Image by graur codrin via freedigitalphotos.net.

A gal who was lacking in wit
One more jolt was her goal,
Demonstration, her role.
To her friends she just looked like a twit.

© Rachel Hoyt 2011.  All rights reserved.


This is my entry for MadKane's Witless Limerick Off.
I appreciate your comments and hope you won't scoff.


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21 comments:

  1. photos by janAugust 7, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    nice rhyme. Made me grin.

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  2. BlogNosticsAugust 7, 2011 at 6:26 PM

    there are plenty of twits around. Why do you think they call it twitter?

    A

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  3. UnknownAugust 7, 2011 at 6:29 PM

    It would be good if i commented under the right name no?

    A

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  4. Bryan WhiteAugust 7, 2011 at 6:51 PM

    Hmm, seems like a bad place to take a nap.
    Those trains tend to wake you with an awful slap.

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  5. nelsonAugust 7, 2011 at 6:56 PM

    Really appreciate your time writing this post to share with us..^_^..Nice rhyme. Visit me too. have a lovely new week!

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  6. RimlyAugust 7, 2011 at 9:02 PM

    That brought a smile on my lips. Needed that today...


    http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/08/reawakening.html

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  7. Rachel HoytAugust 7, 2011 at 10:24 PM

    @Jan - Thanks for visiting. :)

    @Alejandro - I accept both comments gladly. :)

    @Bryan - That would be quite a "slap" indeed. :)

    @nelson - I'm glad you enjoyed the rhyme. :)

    @Rimly - So glad I could rhyme you a smile! :)

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  8. Larry LewisAugust 8, 2011 at 7:31 AM

    Think you crossed the line with this one, feel you need to get back on track. i think you've gone Loco, so whats your motive

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  9. Rachel HoytAugust 8, 2011 at 9:24 AM

    @Larry - LOL. I can't tell if you're serious or just wanted to drop a bunch of train lingo. :)

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  10. AnonymousAugust 8, 2011 at 9:43 AM

    Call me strange, but I sort of want to try it now. I don't mond looking like a twit.

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  11. mindsingerAugust 8, 2011 at 3:46 PM

    Thanks for the grin!

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  12. jennifayeAugust 8, 2011 at 4:31 PM

    very witty :)

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  13. Marbles in My PocketAugust 8, 2011 at 5:17 PM

    Cute and funny. Thanks for the smile!

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  14. Jesse.s.mitchellAugust 8, 2011 at 5:37 PM

    hey! This is awesome! I love it.

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  15. Mari Sterling WilburAugust 8, 2011 at 5:52 PM

    Gave me a nice chuckle :D

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  16. Madeleine Begun KaneAugust 9, 2011 at 12:52 AM

    Thanks so much for another fun contribution to my Limerick-Offs!

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  17. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallAugust 9, 2011 at 8:52 AM

    what a fun tickle, smiles.

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  18. Rachel HoytAugust 9, 2011 at 8:43 PM

    @Doug - Let me know how it is. :)

    @mindsinger - Glad I could make you grin. :)

    @jennifaye - Thanks! :)

    @Marbles in My Pocket - I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

    @Jesse - Hey! THANKS! :)

    @Mari - I always love a good chuckle. :)

    @Madeleine - I love your Limerick-Offs! :)

    @The Cello Strings - Smiles to you and tickles too. :)

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  19. Shah WhartonAugust 10, 2011 at 3:54 AM

    Cute and funny! Shah. X

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  20. Online RouletteAugust 10, 2011 at 11:07 PM

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  21. Rachel HoytAugust 11, 2011 at 6:05 AM

    @Shah Wharton - Thanks! :)

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Rhyming or not, I would like a lot to hear the thoughts my words brought...

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