Sunday, October 9, 2011

Batman is on the Case


Image by Luigi Diamanti via freedigitalphotos.net

A woman at work on a case
Had Batman show up at her place
Said he saw in the sky
The bat signal (no lie)
But she just didn't trust his thin face.

© Rachel Hoyt 2011.  All rights reserved.


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This post was written for Mad-Kane's Limerick-Off.
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17 comments:

  1. Farfalla Dreams ~ Lisa Marie FarfallaOctober 9, 2011 at 11:12 AM

    Maybe he was a counterfeit batman? haha Always trust your instincts!!! ;)

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  2. Pat HattOctober 9, 2011 at 12:13 PM

    Could have been a wannabe
    Who escaped from the crazy tree

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  3. Madeleine Begun KaneOctober 9, 2011 at 12:53 PM

    Amazing story! Fun limerick! Thanks for your frequent Limerick-Off contributions!

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  4. Dangerous LindaOctober 10, 2011 at 9:41 AM

    I want to know what happens next!!!

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  5. Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson BarryOctober 10, 2011 at 10:21 AM

    fun limerick.

    enjoyed it, fit for halloween.

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  6. ElleOctober 10, 2011 at 2:31 PM

    i love how you use batman in this one!! really fun.

    <3
    Elle
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    http://elleteaemm.wordpress.com
    short stories, poems, music, ramblings .....

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  7. photos by janOctober 10, 2011 at 2:39 PM

    How fun, loved it.

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  8. AnonymousOctober 10, 2011 at 5:03 PM

    Totally loved it!

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  9. Martha Jane OrlandoOctober 10, 2011 at 5:20 PM

    I love limericks, and this one was simply too cute! Maybe we should start a limerick game on Blogplicity?

    Thank you for making me smile tonight!

    Blessings!

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  10. AnonymousOctober 10, 2011 at 5:24 PM

    What happens next.....

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  11. BongoOctober 10, 2011 at 5:38 PM

    Cute ...As always.....XOXOXOXOXOX

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  12. Mari Sterling WilburOctober 10, 2011 at 6:28 PM

    Love it!!

    http://www.mariscamera.blogspot.com/

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  13. Rachel HoytOctober 10, 2011 at 8:57 PM

    @Farfalla Dreams - It was totally a counterfeit, but his story was quite a hit! :)

    @Pat Hatt - He seems a bit crazy to me... and possibly a batman wannabe. :)

    @Madeleine - I love your limerick contest! It's the best! :)

    @Dangerous Linda - Well, this first limerick story is actually tru, but perhaps someday I'll invent a sequel for you. :)

    @Morning - I'm always glad to inspire Batman. I mean, I do what I can. :)

    @Elle - I take what the news gives me. There are so many wacky stories to see. :)

    @Jan - I'm glad I could make you smile! Thanks for stopping by for a while. :)

    @Sea Green Natural - Thanks!! :)

    @Martha - A Blogplicity game sounds fun, but I don't have time these days hun'. :)

    @sparklemezen - I'm not sure what happens after that... maybe he went home to a lady cat?

    @Bongo - Thanks!! xo

    @Mari - Thank you! :)

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  14. JANUOctober 10, 2011 at 9:24 PM

    Fun...smiles.

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  15. AnonymousOctober 12, 2011 at 12:35 PM

    You can never go wrong with a Batman limerick :)

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  16. Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton October 13, 2011 at 12:05 AM

    submit a poem to poets rally if you could.

    bless your talent.

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  17. Rachel HoytOctober 14, 2011 at 9:43 AM

    @JANU - Thanks! I'm gald you enjoyed it. :)

    @Doug Stevens - I know, right? Na-na-na-na-na-na-na-na-BATMAN!!! :)

    @The Orange Tree - Thanks for visiting! Sorry I haven't had time for poets rally lately.

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Rhyming or not, I would like a lot to hear the thoughts my words brought...

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