A fellow was in a bad mood.
His order had been misconstrued.
He'd ordered some Duff
but it was a bluff.
The bottle was empty. How rude!
© Rachel Hoyt 2011. All rights reserved.
This is my entry for Mad Kane's Limerick Off.
and is being shared in the Thursday Poets' Rally.
This is my entry for Mad Kane's Limerick Off.
and is being shared in the Thursday Poets' Rally.
A Simpson's reference is always cool.
ReplyDeleteI can't believe it took this long for someone to start making the beer, but I thought I should announce my discovery that it has finally appeared. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your fun contribution to this week's Limerick-Off!
ReplyDeletethat truly makes us smile.
ReplyDeleteenjoyed the humor.
Happy Rally.
Thanks for the smile! :D
ReplyDeletea liked the humour in this piece....:)
ReplyDeleteGreat limerick, always these make me smile
ReplyDeleteThat Moe, he's such a joker.
ReplyDeletei love limericks! though.. i have not started writing one.. but i do love reading them..!
ReplyDeletehappy rally! ;]
@Madeleine - I love your Limerick-Off contest! The variety of responses is the best. :)
ReplyDelete@Jingle - Thanks for hosting the poets' rally. I love seeing the growth of your participant tally! :)
@beccagivens - You're welcome missy. Thanks for visiting me. :)
@Chim - So glad you liked the piece!
@mindlovesmisery - Limericks are perfect smile fodder in my opinion. :)
@Mike - That Moe is quite silly... though probably less than Willie. :)
@veronica - I'm glad you enjoyed the limerick! :)
humorous...
ReplyDeleteenjoyed!
It was a fun light-read. I don't know if I was supposed to...but I actually LOLed. :D
ReplyDeleteHaha! Loved this one!
ReplyDeleteClever and very funny! Thankyou for my sunday morning laugh :)
ReplyDeleteGreat humor in your short poem!
ReplyDeleteI smiled. Thanks for the crisp rhyme! :)
ReplyDeleteHaha! How adorable!
ReplyDeleteWow! Naice..
ReplyDeleteAlcina
very funny! a lovely and light read : )
ReplyDelete@Premi - Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the humor. :)
ReplyDelete@dcec - I always consider an LOL at my work a good thing. :)
@Summer Rain - Thank you!
@Mark - I'm always happy to provide a laugh. :)
@Cindy - Thanks! Short is sometimes harder for me. :)
@Clariice - I'm glad you found the rhyme to be crisp. :)
@Classic NYer - Hehe. Thanks!
@Alcina - Thank you.
@Dan Baker - I'm glad you enjoyed the light reading. :)
Simply impressive ..
ReplyDeleteHere’s mine poetry work ..
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/05/23/satisfy-the-hunger-of-success/
HAPPY RALLY !! xD
@ashbeezone - Thank you! Happy poets' rally to you too! :)
ReplyDeleteToo freakin cute! Love it.
ReplyDelete@torquethis - I was just imagining how I would feel... :)
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