Sunday, April 3, 2011

Reservatrol #poetweet

Image © Rachel Hoyt 2010.  All Rights Reserved.

Reservatrol, my friend,
on you I'll depend.
If radiation reaches me,
What a sad happy day it'll be.

© Rachel Hoyt 2011.  All rights reserved.

My NaPoWriMo Poem #4

13 comments:

  1. You want a transfusion?
    Prick me
    and see the illusion.

    A

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  2. Thanks, but I've already been injected. If not, your offer wouldn't be rejected. :)

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  3. I guess if radiation is headed your way then drinking red wine is a good way to spend the day.

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  4. ah! I do take the pills lol. I hope they do work indeed, a funny bit, I like. Enjoy the rally!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/03/ravishing-beauty/

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  5. Sounds like a good way to go! Neat and meaningful, Rachel.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/04/04/moments/

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  6. i thought this was a cute poem, but it has a meaning behind it....very mysterious..

    here is my link: http://mypoetrywriting.blogspot.com/2011/04/family-time.html

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  7. @Doug - they really are giving regular updates here in CA to let us know if we need to be worried about the radiation from Japan. I drink wine to counteract their preemptive worry mostly. I hope I have some left when/if the radiation actually gets here. :)

    @lynniama - You take the pills? Are you near the radiation? :(

    @jessica - I definitely think at some point I'd have to just stop worrying and drink wine! :)

    @chim - Thank you! I definitely try to hint at additional (serious) meaning in every silly thing I write. :)

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  8. I'm not sure I would be living in CA right now. That kind of stuff is really scary to me. Your meaning behind your poem is actually quite powerful to me.

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  9. interesting to me,
    but your words are done super lovely...

    Thanks for sharing.
    A++

    Bless your day.

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  10. @Mary - It probably helps that I'm not watching the news TOO much because I'm certain they are discussing radiation all the time. I hate that they make it sound so scary currently. Sure, it might reach us here and we may need to take precautions, but there is very little practical, non-panic-inducing advice being given. Good thing I found this news story on red wine protecting from radiation though. I'm all stocked up! :)

    @Jingle - Thanks for the sweet rhyming comment! Always a pleasure to have you stop by. :)

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  11. such wonderful truth rachel.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/01/21/remain/

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  12. Interesting take on the events of the day. An evening drinking wine with a good friend is a good way to handle any difficulty :)

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  13. Thank you fiveloaf & PhotoDiction. Yes, relaxing and enjoying times with friends is never a bad thing. :)

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Rhyming or not, I would like a lot to hear the thoughts my words brought...